Maybe, someday you could
Fly me to a distant moon.
Maybe someday we could
Frolic in gravity-less grounds
Maybe, for once we could
Escape the creased frowns
Maybe, escaping gravity
We would be us once again
Maybe, we’d b be so high up
For once people would look up to us
Maybe, baby.
Fly me to a distant moon.
Author notes
I'm bored... are you? : Option 3
A contest entry
- I'm bored. ...Are you? by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended July 26, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comment please!
Comments
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It was great!!! The only question I have is in the first stanza did you mean "we" instead of "you" because it seems you use the word "we" for the rest of the poem. Anyway great job and good luck in the contest!
*Frozen Angel* -
Ohhhhh!!
This was really, really beautiful.
I loved how it was a new story...
You wrote it just for my contest! Bonus for that.
But I would really love this even if it was a prewrite. You wrote it really, really well, and you're great poet.
Sorry it took me so long to comment!
COntests always keep me busy
But I really enjoyed this. You did great.
Thanks sooo much for entering my contest, great poem and good luck!
xoxo
Tay
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