There I stood, the silver sand curling around my feet, gentle waves crashing onto my legs, I hesitated only secconds before diving. I let myself slide effortlesly through the layers of liquid - which when I opened my eyes cast an eerie tint to the forgotton world.
Author notes
um I forgot to finnish by the end of the contest I entered it in. I suppose it sort of speaks for itself a little ...
A contest entry
- Fandi Contest I - Options by Asfand.
225 points, ended July 10, 2007, 42 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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wow.it was beautifully written,........i liekd the wordings u used and the structure was beautiful indeed!!
gud job!!! -
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Thanks
, I can't believe I forgot to finnish it for the contest *blushes*
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