Beautiful is
something to be judged
but not by
yourself.
Beautiful is
supposed to be
curvy and
sparkly.
Beautiful is
meant to be
the auma
shining through.
Beautiful is
something which They
are not able
to be classified as.
Beautiful is
the one winged angel
as she falls
from grace.
Beautiful is
something I wish
everyone could
see.
Beauty is
in everything.
Author notes
I did Beautiful - Marillion.
I've never heard it, so if this sounds like the song, then I have no idea how it happened.
Auma is an actual word. Aura is the outward spiritual energy, and Auma is the fire or energy from within.
um...this is a poem..hope you like it... i think its okay.
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This is gentle, full of feeling and demonstrates the inner beauty people keep talking about, but never know.
I did enjoy this, and at a time when I needed to be reminded.
Thank you.
Lis.beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Beauty really is in everything, and is basically what the song is about to... Being yourself and by that being beautiful..
Very well written poem! =)
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 5.
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gay
It sounds gay like when you were saying in the chatterbox right. Mabye your are gay. For a moment i thought your were joking about that. -
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yeah,um, I wasn't joking. I actually am gay.
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Wow that is amazing, though I have to disagree with the first stanza, as I love to judge myself as absolutely beautiful, makes me feel very good about myself,but maybe that is just me
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well what i was really trying to convey is that, sometimes, people don't see the beauty in us, and call us things like ugly and fat, when really, the beauty is inside of us.
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Well that makes sense, I'm just not sure that meshes so well with the first bit of your poem, but yeah I suppose maybe it works. Shouldn't we judge ourselves as beautiful and if other people can't see that just put those people in the 'not worth my time or emotions' box? I suppose that does kind of work with your poem.
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