You're Not

Immortal

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  • theDARK1
    February 10, 2008

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    physically i'm not, but the character i created through the one i'm speaking through is at itz an alter ego. love this word and now you can probably guess why, DARK.


  • bedraggled1
    July 5, 2007

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    Actually...

    yer wrong. We are ALL immortal!

    (In spirit and soul that is). The body may die, but the soul lives on without end.

    I love the word choice though! Nice job!!


  • Eternal Twilight
    July 2, 2007
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    Love this word! Good luck!


  • Taylor Renee
    July 2, 2007

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    Haha.
    I'm with Blu. If he's immortal, I'm gonna make him make me immortal
    But I agree with the point
    ANd seriously, you're right. This is one of my favorites
    Great work, good luck and thanks for entering!!
    xoxo
    Tay


    • Andrew Timothy
      July 2, 2007
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      Yes! All the imnmortal people shall rule the earth! (holy crap am I hyper...)


  • Andrew Timothy
    July 2, 2007
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    I'm with Blu. not everyone else


  • Blurith
    July 1, 2007

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    I'm immortal, so we will have to agree to disagree

    Good write tho, applies to everyone else in the world


  • Gary Alexander silver member
    July 1, 2007
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    Not quite.

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