"GET A ROOM!!" Jarred slightly giggled as he shout across the room at Alex and Jake.1
"Oh you guys are just jealous" Alley screamed back at Susan.2
"Those guys are a little strange," Susan gestured to Jarred.3
"Yeah but not as stramge as I feel for you," he replied leaning in for another kiss.4
Susan lightly giggled and kissed him back. It was a long, passionate kiss that you see in the movies. After she pulled back for some air, she told Jarred that she had to get up early the next morning so she better head on home. 5
"Well I guess I'll just have to walk you home," he said hinting at her that he wanted to come in once they got there,"Should we tell them?"6
"No they'll never notice we're gone." She giggled at her own gesture.7
As they walked around the 4 blocks to Susan's house, they talked about school, pat relationships and what both of them we're planning to do with the rest of their lives.8
"Well here you are," Jarred said determined that he was at least going to get on last kiss. 9
"I'll see you tommorrow at school, babe" she tried to throw in casualy but it didnt work.10
"I think I'm goina cry!"11
"Ohhh its only one night, silly" she said kind of flattered.12
Author notes
so....... tired...... of............... typing.
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lol your author's comment made me laugh. One mistake: "pat relationships" should be "past relationships" Other than that, nice write. It had a nice humourous touch to it every now and then. I think I'll read chapters 1-4 now, lol. (Probably should have done that before I read this one but...lol)
Anyways, nice write and good luck with this story.
-morgana
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