Chapter 1

It was a cool night, stars bright, full moon on the horizon, the sounds of the waves crashing along the white sandy beach. It was completely quiet except for two people, two people who had never met till this fateful night. Though they had never met till this cool night on the beach they felt like they had been connected throughout the ages. 1

He was looking for something he should not have been on-line. He knew better but it was a feeling he couldn`t keep under control. See, he was a Marine. On leave from Okinawa, Japan where he was stationed. And everyone knows there is nothing that compares to the beauty of the women in America. But little did he know that he would find the one woman that would fill him with love and passion and a friendship that was destined to out last everything else. This isn't your typical, run of the mill, ordinary guy but out on this day he was. He wanted to find a woman to pass the time with...someone who was as "frustrated" as he was, a possible cyber slave?. He didn`t care who he just wanted the mental imagery of what a woman wanted to do with him, he needed that mental stimulation to go along with the physical...he loved passion. Little did he know that he wasn`t going to fulfill this little fantasy of his, not yet at least. But instead discover the one he would later be so enthusiastic about when finally all his fantasies come true.2

Who could this be? (his angel) 3

Little did she know that when she woke up this morning she would meet someone that she would later claim that she needs them in the worst ways. It was probably just another day for her. A day filled with friends and chit chat. Catering and hosting wonderful gatherings for friends. She was the Social Queen. The girl everyone loves. But she was the girl with no one to love. For all her accomplishments and friends she had she was missing that one thing in her life, something to fill her with joy...Love. Of course she was proud and happy with all that she had but she wanted that one thing...that "one" to enjoy the little things with, that "one" to share her life with. Who was this? (the marine)                  4

They were walking hand in hand. Both looking up at the stars. He could feel her nails smoothly scratch his hand, his thumb circling the top of her hand. Both at a certain peace. They could feel how much love there was between them, it showed, glowed and permeated from their souls, her eyes sparkled in the full moonlight. He watched her figure glide in the cool night air, her hair flowing with the wind. What beauty, this angel of his. Ever since he had started talking to her he could do nothing but think of her, he had waited for months for this night. There was not one day he did not think about her. She took care of him as best she could from a distance: giving sound advice and genuinely confessing her love for him. That`s all she had to make him happy, of course she felt otherwise always wanting to do more...to take care of him...he didn`t mind, he loved her and enjoyed the time they spent together immensely.  He had always been very fond of her. There was nothing she could do to disappoint him. They had connected with their minds and hearts and knew that they would be together for a long time. 5

They`re favorite things? The small stuff. The stuff just the two of them did alone. Walks, movies, long talks far into the night. Confessing their love was another favorite. And now here he was watching his angel by his side. It was just amazing. She was wearing a black skirt with a burgundy spaghetti strapped top. And his sweatshirt wrapped around her. He was wearing a pair of shorts and his infamous Lakers jersey. He had a blanket for them to lie upon underneath the shining stars. They stopped at a spot on the beach in between some sand dunes...dunes to the left and right and a slight rise to the hill they were to lay on. Their own private little beach. They were the only two left. He sat down first, she followed sitting between his legs her back to him. He wrapped his hand around her and held her tight. She reached behind with her arm around his neck and pulled his head close to hers. He could smell her sweet scent mixed with the fresh ocean air...he gently moved her hair to the side exposing her neck to him. Her slender neck glistened in the night from the mist from the crashing waves. He gently kissed her neck. Starting at the base of her neck...right where her neck and shoulder meet...moving up slowly...her smooth skin on his lips...gently sucked on the small spot behind her ear right above the neck...nibbles on her ear lobe...she giggles. he smiles...his hands wrapped around her tightly, her hands on his....he whispers into her ear..."Angel, u have made me the happiest man on this planet...I never want to leave your side. I LOVE YOU with ALL OF MY HEART AND SOUL.  6

She turns her head towards him. Their eyes lock lost in each others gaze peering into each others soul, she whispers to him..."I love you" and tilts her head to give him that "playful" look as if to say "well what r u waiting for silly." Their lips lock. She tastes so good. Their tongues explore, rolling, licking, sucking at each other. Deep passionate french kisses take over...he lays her down, her hands around his neck ...they lay on their sides never parting lips. He lays her on top...legs intertwined..his arms around her waist hugging her....kisses continuing, his hands running along her back..his palm on the small of her back pressing their bodies together...his hand moves down gently caressing her ass, moves back up along her back. She kisses him all over his face. Moves down to his neck, pecking, sucking...she removes his jersey, his hands are all over her body gently rubbing, caressing, massaging her...He stops her. 7

She was confused, and asked him what was wrong. A simple "nothing" was said. He laid her on her back. Slowly undressed her. She helped with the skirt, he pulled down from the waist, gliding his hand along her smooth thighs, pulling it from her legs, and placed it to the side. As he was coming back up he ran his finger along her thigh, tracing her thigh from the outside to the inside, he could feel her heat. He traced up along her leg, kissing her thighs, moving up to her tummy. Tonguing her tummy...circling her belly button kissing it. Her hand now in his...he continued up...kissing her body through her top, he reached his hands to the side of her top, moving underneath pushing it up, his hands gently grazing her breast...over her head...as he leans over her, his legs on both sides of her straddling her, he stands up and slides his shorts off...his member erect...he leans down on her..their lips lock...again tongues move in unison massaging each other ...fever pitch passion...she can "feel" him on her tummy. Gently grinding on her...kissing, holding hands tightly..he can feel her nails in his hands...he continues kissing her, holding her hands he moves down. Kissing her body...starts with her chin...moves down to her neck gently sucking on her...he can feel her arch under him....slowly grinding each other....feeling each other move....she can feel how hard he is for her along her thigh....he moves down...right above her breast...lightly sucking on her...licking her full breast...tracing a line from the top of her breast to her nipple...rolling his tongue around the areola gently flicking her erect nipple....circling it....sucking her into his mouth...his hand slowly massages her other breast....thumbing her nipple, he keeps his hand on her left breast while he continues down...her hand on top of his guiding his hand on her breast...moving down her tummy wet kisses in the cool air...running his other hand along her side...down her waist...to her thighs...8

squeezing her thighs...toned and soft at the same time...her smooth legs lets his hand glide effortlessly along her leg...up and down her legs...caressing it...kissing her thigh...moving towards her delicate flower of love....she spreads her legs a little wider...he licks the nectar of her flower that has built up on her lips...circling the outer lips of her love...ever so lightly sucking on her...he teases to penetrate with his tongue...slowly parting them with his tongue..up, down around...not penetrating yet....her hands on the top of head pushing lightly...wanting ...yearning...he resists...just for a second...and gives in...he parts her lips with his tongue...sinking his tongue deep inside her...tasting her glory and passion.  He takes long lick inside her...with his tongue on the tip of her clitoris......massaging with his tongue....he slides a finger inside her...curls his finger upwards and making that "come here` motion with his finger...gets her to arch up...9

He continues this till she cums...quivering in the moonlight...he moves up and continues to assault her with passionate kisses till her body recovers....He slowly part her legs and she guides his love into her...wrapping her legs around him pulling him deep inside her...her arms wrapped around his neck...10

his head buried in her neck...kissing her tasting her...her body against his....his love pulses inside her, (a love flex) as he starts to slide in and out of her. He starts with slow long thrust...almost coming out of her...she holds him in not letting him escape (like he would want to...lol) pulling out leaving only the tip in her and pushing back in deep ...in....out......in......out......in .....out.....her hands move to his back, he can feel her nails scratch him...he likes it...and begins to thrust faster....hearing her moan...wanting more...her whispering..."more, babe, more...faster...."gives him such a pleasure, she sounds so beautiful...he knows how lucky he is....he goes faster a little harder...pumping her with his love...she grinds and gyrates to meet his movements...her nails scratch harder...their passion building...his member pulsing inside her...sliding in and out...she squeezes him cumming...holding him inside her as he cums with her...filling her with his love...his passion...their bliss....This is their little piece of heaven and she is his ANGEL. 11

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A fantasy told, never fulfilled.

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  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    Wow! If this fantasy is ever truly fulfilled, I know a lady who will be very very sated, indeed! Wow! Very intensely passionate and just plain HOT! Very much enjoyed this; it is wonderfully written!


  • Vampykitty
    November 29, 2005
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    uhhhhh.. that was so damn awsome.. so differ the what im into but hell it was so passionent ans warming.. ur great dude


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    November 21, 2005
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    Excellent build up on the characters, I think a slight bit more dialogue would help this piece along very nicely. Other than that, this is a great piece of work that keeps the two of them hidden in the shadows. Interesting way of writing. Good job


  • Celticmoon
    November 14, 2005
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    WOW!

    Hot!
    Sensual!
    Passionate!
    All the making of a perfect write.
    A beautiful erotic love story you have told.
    I became completely enthrawled in it.
    I loved every bit of it!


    Blessings
    celticmoon

  • passionsdaughter
    October 20, 2005
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    Captivating

    Passionate flows from the heart...wrapped in the tenderness of true love makes this more than just erotic, but a love story. Well done!

    Nicole

  • ArieLLeGiSeLLe
    May 24, 2005
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    Erotic and beautiful

    I admit that the latter half of this write was beautiful, arousing, well-composed but the first part was so loosely written. You often repeated words over and over such as "neck" "thigh" "tongue" et cetera. There wasn't much of a story to it, just passion. I think this would do well withoutthe introduction and just focus on the beach. Also "(like he would want to...lol)" totally halts the reader.
    Much Love
    Arielle Giselle


  • badkitty2
    May 23, 2005
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    This is so good. Sweet, passionate loving. Very waell done!

  • nine tails
    April 4, 2005
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    Thx for the comments on mine, I don't get many. I liked this poem; it had great content. Might I suggest that you make it a little shorter, it might catch the reader's attention more (just a suggestion no freakin on me lol) great poem though.

  • HighlordTalymar
    December 9, 2004
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    You got LOTS of brownie points for actually submitting some erotica that fit with the contest, but brownie points alone don't win second place in contests... great job and keep writing!

  • HighlordTalymar
    December 8, 2004
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    W
    O
    W
    !

    I really didn't think ayone would put any erotica intothis contest but i guess i was wrong... I absolutely love your style, wonderful. I think about the only thing I didn't like about it is that you keep using the same words over and over... Pronouns are your friends!

    Excellent piece of work, good luck indeed!

  • Arcomage
    December 8, 2004
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    OMG DAMN! You were right to mention that I might get a "rise" out of this. I got more than I bargained for!


  • Ted E Bare
    December 5, 2004
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    S-m-o-o-t-h, s-w-e-e-t, t-e-n-d-e-r Sensations! Dreams are made of this. What a wonderful place to be!



    s
    Ted E.

  • GrowinginFaith
    November 27, 2004
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    this was a sweet write, it was full of imagery and I loved it, it was amazing. Great job!

  • ImFallingFast
    November 26, 2004
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    Passion between lovers is so beautiful. Ecstacy is only a heartbeat away as heaven is reached through climax. Good luck in the contest.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    September 16, 2004
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    I have read erotica before but I also have to afress with the others, it was sweet, it was loving, it was nocely written, good images and visuals.


  • stolen fairy
    July 22, 2004
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    This is sweet... good descriptions and imagery! well done.


  • blkmagicwoman
    July 22, 2004
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    Very nice write, made me wet, I think I will be jumping my mans bones tonight!!

  • Crimsonsky
    July 21, 2004
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    great

    this is the kind of erotica I like...sweet and loving....this was a very good write, thank you

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