The Friends- Ch.4

"Oh my gosh, you HAVE to try this on!" Jessica says to Susan. 1

"Gosh! Why am I doin this again?" Susan says thinking that if she evr tries on another skirt, it'll be to soon. 2

"You want to look extra sexy for Jarred dont you? Especcialy at this dance!" Alley said putting a twang on the word Jarred.3

"Oh...yeah sure." Susan said acting like she didnt care.4

She was actually lost in the night before when they had kissed. She made a heavy sigh and couldn't wait to be with him again.5

"THIS THING IS SOOO FREAKIN UNCOMFORTABLE!!!" Susan shouted through the dressing room. 6

"EXACTLY!!"Alley giggled.7

Susan stepped out of the dressing room into a 360 mirrior. Her friends gasped, and then looked at each other "YOU"V GOT TO GET IT" They said simultaniously and Susan thought that that was kind of creepy.8

"o.k. If it'll make him happy" she said lazily.9

"Of course it would" Alley said with a sly grin on her face as they headed to the sales counter.10

That night, Alley and Jessica came over and decided that the 3 of them were all goin to go out together. So Alley handled the girl's hair, Jessica the makeup and Susan kind of handled the cloths.11

They went to the local club and met up with Jarred and his "crew". It was one of those type clubs where everyone danced and there were dim lights everywhere. "Can I have this dance?" Jarred asked Susan with a slight grim, trying his best not to laugh as he bowed. 12

Susan tried not to giggle to as she said yes. They went out onto the floor and danced till around midnight. While the others just madeout, alot.13

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  • InvisibleKitty
    July 20, 2004
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    /claps/ bravo bravo.

  • maybe slightly here
    July 20, 2004
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    hey i've read all four of the chapters and love em all! great write, that i can relate to in alot of ways, actually. keep it up!
    peace,
    caroline


  • dying4life
    July 20, 2004
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    awwww so cute i can so imagin them dancing this amazingly good lovin how this story is ending out its sooo beyond good gr8 write
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