Poem: Mom Appreciation

Mom I appreciate you,
I love you and everything that you do,
You clean my room and you vaccuum it too,
You make my dinner always with a shimmer,
You take care of me,
Along with chuckie,
My favorite fish,
You fufilled my wish!!!!


This goes out to my mom who is always helping me and taking care of me...I love you mom!!!!!

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  • Taylor Renee
    June 28, 2007

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    lol. This was grewata Chey.
    The flow was good, and I got the message
    I'm sure your mom woould like this poem!!! You should show it to her
    I actually think you're a great poet!! Better than I can do
    xoxo
    Great job BFF!!
    See ya tomorrow!!!
    xoxo (again)
    Tay

  • Lynn of the Forest
    June 28, 2007
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    Love this poem. I thought you did a great job. It had a nice flow and agood place.