Beaten and broken she crumbles to the floor, her guitar clasped in her arms, the smooth black wood cool against her skin.
Author notes
One of those sentency stories. heh. =]
A contest entry
- I'm bored. ...Are you? by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended July 26, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. That is a very...short story! Like, really short! But I liked it. Would have been better had it been a piano, though...j/k. You know I'm a sucker for the piano. But great job. I wish I could write like that...
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It's one of those sentence stories! I find those difficult, but you did great on it. Nice emotions, and descriptions.
Luv, IMqueen
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AHHH! Not a prewrite!!!
Yay! Double points for you! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
Sorry. Got a little out of control there
Thanks again! -
I loved this!
One of my favorites so far, I really liked it.
The one word sentences are sort of hard, but you did good on it!
The emotions here were really good. You did a great job!
Thanks for entering, and good luck in my contest!
xoxo
Tay
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