• Oh my fair deity
How beautiful are you
Even the angels envy you
Wanting to steal your beauty
• Like a flower you bloom
Like a rose of lovely scent and perfume
Putting butterflies in lullabies
Mesmerizing the honeybees
• My fair lovely queen
Like spring to live and green
Like the stars that spark so bright
When dark, you give them bright
• Your eyes of crystal blue
Shining the way diamonds do
Your eyes replace the moon at night
Only there are no diamonds that bright
• Oh beauty deity of my heart
You shot me down with a dart
Now I put my heart to your ease
Handle it the way you please
• For I have no life to enjoy
You are my only joy
I have nothing precious to give
While loving you I can live
• Oh deity of mine
Let’s sit for red wine
Let’s toast for love
I make you my homeward dove
Author notes
poem about love
A contest entry
- I'm bored. ...Are you? by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended July 26, 2007, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hmm
normally i don't like poems, but that was good -
Some of your poems are just lovely. This was sweet and so feel of love that I wished it was for me by my husband. Great flow. Keep it up.
~*Brooke*~
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Maybe someone should make a contest called "I'm in love... are you?" - and you WILL win hands down
Woot!
Pete is in love!
Well, that's what I got when I read this it's adorable.. love practically oozes from it, touching and just seeping through me... it's a beautiful thing, to be inspired by love more beautiful, too, if we get this feeling penned - and you've done that, greatly, too!
This deity of yours... she has to read this, Pete ^_^ it's a lovely tribute.. I'm sure she'd love it as did I! Good luck with the contest
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thanks for da comment dear i appreciate loads and loadsss
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Yay!
I liked it. It was really, really pretty.
The flow went really well, and it was such a...heartwarming (?) poem!
I stink at poems So it made this even better!
The rhyming wasn't stressed, so that was great.
This was really good.
Oh yeah. Brownie points! It's a new one
Anyway, great job! I definately enjoyed this
Thanks for entering, and good luck!!!
xoxo
Tay
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Nice poem
Good luck with the contest. I can see this queen of yours sitting on a pedelstal. -
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thanks alots
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This was very sweet, did you write it for any special girl in your life?
Excellent flow, the words were dancing in a sea of awesomeness.
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well its just a dream abt someone i love
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aww, good luck man. Knock this dream girl off her socks whenever the chance arises
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