The Friends.

"Hey guys, wait up," Susan said while trying to catch up with her friends, again. 1

"Why do you always have to leave me behind?" She couldnt help but to be jealous. They were tall, thin, and beautiful. They always had a boyfriend but never the same one, "It's bad for the rep." is what they told her. She always wondered why they hung out with her. She was short, unpopular, and was ind of Tomboy-ish. Always the one in the back of the class watching everyone goof off, laugh, makeout, or just throw stuff at the teachers. She was a nobody!2

"Oh! Susan you should come to my house tonight! Alley is comin over and we can give you a make over and go on a... well.... a triple date!!! My cousin has a friend that would be PERFECT for you" Jessica said as she reapplied her hot pink lipstick.3

"Um... sounds like fun but I dont think I will you gu--" Susan started.4

"Oh you HAVE to it wouldnt be any fun without you, besides what else have you got to do?" Alley said half hoping that Susan would still reject the offer.5

Susan's friends were always the center of attention while Susan just tried to sit near them. They were usually in a corner of the theater with their boyfriend, never watching the movie.6

"Um," she half wayed grinned, "I already have a date!" To late, she broke out a huge smile and made a deep sigh but when she opened her eyes, she was alone. They had left her, again.7

Later that night, she decided to give herself her own lil makeover. She sat at her vanity and pilled out all the make-up she had been stealing from Alley and Jessica over the years. She knew they would get more, they always did. 8

She pulled her hair back in a curly ponytail, like her friends and even bring down the little bang like they always did. Then she applied the metallic pink lipstick, the peach blush, and the light copper colored eyeshadow. 9

Then it was off to her dresser,she pulled out the black teddy and the pink thongs that Jessica and Alley gave her one christmas as a gag gift. Then to go over that the short black skirt with the silver belt buckel on the front that made her legs look 5' long, matching with the black strapless shirt with hottie on the boobs. 10

Then she walked over to her closet to slip on her black heels, and out through the window she went, luckily she lived on the 1st floor.11

As she walked down the sidewalk she felt like a stripper but this was how her friends dressed and she couldnt wait to see Jared. He was tall with black hair and pretty popular, she didnt even relize he was talking to her when he asked her out. So she ha to look her best for him tonight. She HAD to give her friends something to talk about.12

When she arrived to the club, the guard checked her I.D. and then escorted her to the table where Jarred was waiting, his jaw almost dropped and he had to look twice to mak sure it was really her, but then he relized it was her and almost tripped on himself while trying to pull out her chair.13

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  • BrokenVanity
    July 21, 2004
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    I LOVE IT!!! No ideas but IM me and I will help you, I promise. This is being bookmarked.

  • Megan Dearest
    July 19, 2004
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    Britt this is awesome. TEENAGE WASTELAND AND DRAMA. Woooo Whoooo. Great story so far. I am drained, so I have no suggestion.

    Meg