Forgotten

You wacthed me struggle, now watch my haunted self die.

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  • Taylor Renee
    June 26, 2007

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    Wow.
    This was really powerful. I think it was great.
    Awesome entry for the contest.
    Great job!
    Good luck in the contest!
    xoxo
    Tay


  • Embitter
    June 25, 2007

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    Neat... It gives you a vast imagery of ghosts, metaphorical and literal. The word haunted really stands out here, as does struggle.