He would have cut off his own arm, given his life, walked through blazing fire; if only to get his little sister back.
Author notes
UH yeah this was random One sentence story for the contest. Um this is called Melody cuz thats suppost to be his little sisters name
I guess this is just cuz I believe in strong love in families
What do you think? Feel free to critize!!!
A contest entry
- Nano Stories by Embitter.
175 points, ended July 2, 2007, 30 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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That is sweet, (to an extent violent) and brave. Even in one sentence, I can feel how much he loves her. This would make a great "bigger picture" story. (Okay, ignore that part I have no clue what I'm typing, I just woke up.) Anyways, good job.
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Sweetness.
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I don't want to die for someone.. I'd rather live for that person
Haha even in commenting, I bring my cheesiness and mushiness but you can't have soda without mush 
Yeah, I'd rather live for the one I love.. but given the choice of sacrificing (or at least, putting) my life to save someone I love... I'd do that! ^_^ My loyalties are only reserved for a very limited number of people... but those people have earned their spots, so I rightfully will and do fight for them
Good luck with the contest!
P.S. I thought Melody was the title because they could have sounds or something when people do valiant things in movies? Haha, I am odd that way x.x but you get what I mean
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I believe in strong love in families as well. This looks like a great starting story! Good luck in the contest!
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this was really cool, especially since I am really loyal to my family members as well. I can relate to this.
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Awww.. Good imagery.. it really helps grasp the emotion. It seems like this could be a line from a whole story..
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It's good except for the ";" thingy. I'm not quite sure if you need that there or not...
It's nice to have strong families in stories every once and awhile.
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