The Truth

"It's a pain in the neck, sharing a one bedroom apartment with a man just learning to play the violin," she said, handing the revolver to the evidence officer as the handcuffs closed around her wrists.

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  • callthexylophone
    August 18, 2007
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    hee hee!


  • Siby Anan
    July 8, 2007
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    lol! I love this!!


  • Taylor Renee
    June 25, 2007
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    Oh. My. Gosh!!!
    This was soo good!
    Loved it!!!
    It reminded me of this show, CSI, where this guy murdered his wife, and when he got cought and they found the body, his excuse was "She nagged me."
    LIKE OMG! Crazy!!
    lol sorry.
    But this was awesome!!!
    Great job and good luck in the contest!!!
    xoxo
    Tay


  • eyeambaldman
    June 25, 2007
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    Ha! Yes, fantastic! Murdered due to annoyance! Excellent!


  • Embitter
    June 25, 2007

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    Awesome! That's amazing. I love those twisted sort of deranged characters...

    Hee hee, yeah, I can relate.. my friend.. is trying to learn accordion.. which I do't think sounds well when played right even.

    good work, quirky and demented

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