The horde of things lurched spastically out from the tomb, out of the woods towards the town, hooting and shrieking as they went, malformed and hideous in the blood-red dusk- and I watched, and I wept, and I knew that whatever happened was all my fault...
Author notes
Sorry if hyphenating is cheating...
A contest entry
- Nano Stories by Embitter.
175 points, ended July 2, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hm, nah, hyphens always look good :D
I like this quite a bit... you have a certain way with words which make them... I don't know... believeable. Anyways, it's excellent, so good luck in the contest.
~Kevan!~
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I liked this a lot!
It really tunes us into how the character is feeling Great job with that!
I think you did a great job on this! One sentence stories are hard
Great job and good luck in the contest!!!
xoxo
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Nah, I like hyphens.
I also likes zombies!
Reanimator!!Bwhahahaha. I like the description of the dusk.. nice touch! -
I hope you are planning on extending this at some point! I wanna know what happens! lol
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Blame the CaptAnn- she said only write a sentence!
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i like this, it is very... descriptive. i like the vocabulary used in this piece a lot. even though it is just one sentence, it is very "informative" and i think it's great... leaving the reader in suspense at the same time. good job =]
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