Big brother

"Don't worry, big brother. My tiny body can protect you; will keep you warm; So don't cry, the rain has stopped..."

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For my brother Noa. The best brother in the world.

A contest entry

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  • Taylor Renee
    June 26, 2007
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    Oh!!! You know I love this one!
    It's so sweet, finalist COngrads, you're my first finalist
    I love this, thanks soooo much for entering!!!
    xoxo\
    tay


  • Embitter
    June 25, 2007

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    Very poetic, and cute.. I love that this takes the different route than the other pieces.. its sweet and caring, without being romantic. Very cool

  • Taylor Renee
    June 25, 2007
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    OH! I didn't read the authors notes before I commented
    This is for your brother!? Thats so sweet. Makes it even better!
    ...Now I meant she for my last comment
    Anyway, did you show him this? Its so sweet.
    xoxoxo
    Tay

  • Taylor Renee
    June 25, 2007
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    Oh!!! This was so sweet! I loved it! It was kinda sad though, because the way I read it I was thinking...'Why's (S)he got to protect big brother?'
    I love these things! As long as they're good, than we can imagine the whole story based on your start!
    Great job!
    xoxo
    Tay


  • Midnightmare
    June 25, 2007

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    oh my goodness, that was really cute. it was very... sweet. the little bit "my tiny body will protect you" was so adorable and heartfelt, i could feel her concern. good job and good luck!

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