As she slowly raised the gun towards her own head, she whispered in the softest voice to her husband, "I warned you Jake, but I guess this is just what happens when you lie about who you love."
Author notes
Wow.. that was certainly harder then expected, lol.
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That was sad. You should make it into a longer story, I can think of a few ideas for it if you need any...
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Hmmmm.....
I would've loved a story behind this, but i guess this is awesome too!
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O.O
that was.... awesome.
really awesome... haha, the best one sentence story I've ever read Seriously though, it was great! Wow
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That was really good. Who knew that a sentence could say so much.
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Wow, one sentence and you got all that to fit? Very good job, I don't think I'd be able to do that, lol.
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Ouch!.. I'm getting a lot of these dramatic pieces, and they're all sooo good. I like this one though. There's more story to it, but, at the same time.. you really only need the one sentence.
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This. Was. Really. Sad. And. I. Loved. It!
It was so pretty!
Those are hard but you did a great job!!!
I loved it!!!
Great job
xoxo
Tay
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