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UUuuhhhhgggggghhhhhhh. I totally just creeped myself out. ...And came up with a FUCKING AWESOME HORROR CONCEPT at the same time!
Thank you to CaptAnneStarr for the contest inspiration!
Ughhhhhh but seriously. Imagine. You're a poor and scared girl, too young to have a baby, so you go and get an abortion at a strange clinic. Then, despite the abortion having been successful, you realize that there is still something growing inside of your stomach. Something alien and sinister and wrong. Something that wants out.
Holy fuck, I'm totally gonna start writing this right now. Awesome awesome awesome awesome. I LOVE it when I get ideas!
A contest entry
- Nano Stories by Embitter.
175 points, ended July 2, 2007, 30 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So, did you ever get around to writing a full-length story about this concept? I'm still waiting
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Hey I read this story! XD So that means the clinic was just a fake or something? =O
Good job!! =D
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This. Was. So. Freaky!!!!
I cannot imagine that. You have to continue this!!! I demand you to!!!
Omg!
Oh yeah, ans your authors notes are longer than the story
lol!
This will be so great. You have to continue!!!
Dun Dun DUNNNNNNNNN!!!
Good luck in the contest!!!!
xoxo
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*Draws a crucifix* I have to beat at least ten damn demons to death every day!
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Muhahahahahhaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! This is the beginning of something beautiful. I demand more! You shall not rest until this story is fully fleshed (or not, muhahahahahahaaaaa) out! Because, y'know, it's not like you have anything else to do since you live in Bumpkinopolis and not in Pittsburgh, where you belong. So you could at least make this story long and AWESOME. I look forward to the vacant ultrasound scene. Ultrasounds are weird. They put goo on your belly and put a thingy on you to see what's inside your body. I had one 6 years ago, but there was no baby (or ghost baby). Only an appendix gone haywire.
Seriously. Fabulous idea. More. MORE! NOW!
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Whoah this is VERY cool! Definately creepy and a good idea for a story!
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woah, that's quite cool and freaky at the same time. You could really turn that into something very creeeepy
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Bad ass concept! I'd like to read the finished product when you get it done! Nice work, as always!
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That's actually a really, really cool idea.
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!!!!Great, message me when you get it done.. I'd like to hear it.. Wonderful idea...
=).. you might could have her have a flashback to some erased memory or something that caused this fiendish being take u residence in her womb.,
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