The war was over, and Brian clutched Helen's hand tightly, looking at the bodies strewn across the field and listening to the discord of song birds that flew overhead as a single tear trailed down his cheek.
Author notes
One sentence contest
A contest entry
- Nano Stories by Embitter.
175 points, ended July 2, 2007, 30 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, that was amazing. I liked it, and I think you did well. It's a bit like reading the last page of a book before you read the rest of it.
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I liked it!!!
I love these one sentence stories!
They're hard, but when done well I love reading them cuz it's like the reader can make up the story from what you write.
Great job with this, its written really well and the plot's great.
Good luck in the contest !!!
xoxo
Tay -
Ah. There's a good story shoved in that short paragraph... good work on keeping to the once sentence thing..
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