Her note said "I've taken the cat", the words ran as inky tears off the paper.
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Wow that is hard! Can you tell me what you think this means, I'm not sure I conveyed it well.
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Not the cat!!! But I loved. Absolutely loved "the words ran as inky tears off the paper" Definitely my favourite part
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I don't know exactly what this was supposed to say (I mean what the assignment was) the meaning, however, is clear...somebody is taking off!...but it's terrific and I love it. Very orignal. Excellent. Potent!
"Words ran as inky tears..."
Brevity! Wonderful!
GA -
I wasn't exactly going there, but what fay said does make a lot of sense!
I was sorta thinking like cat napping...but im reading a horror novel right now...about kidnapping and crap...so maybe I'm just crazy...
Anyway I liked this one!
Good job!!!
xoxo
Tay -
It seems like someone is packing and leaving her lover to me.. and she's taking the cat.. = )
Very neat idea.
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