With beauty indescribable, she stalks through the night hunting unwary mortal souls.
A contest entry
- Nano Stories by Embitter.
175 points, ended July 2, 2007, 30 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nano story!
He smiled with satisfaction at the sentence, mind spinning imagination.
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This is very poetic and yet very very short.lol It was good though and had no grammar mistakes.
-Marshall -
Guess I better sleep with one eye open
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I loved this!
It was so pretty and it makes us all want more
Great job on it, and it was great!
xoxo
I can imagine so much more fromthis!
Tay -
Waaaaaah.. I want there to be more! With only this line, I had so many things in mind! Speculations.. so many things could have happened, could BE happening! This IS poetic, as Fal said..
and lol, my comment is longer than the actual piece 
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Nice use of diction, very very poetic..
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