To My Love

Dearest Love,

I write to you this letter out of the fondness of my heart.

My feelings for you have dwelled within my heart as our affair has progressed,

and I feel that it is time I finally told you how I truly feel

about you.

I love the way you make me feel beautiful,

and how perfect you try to make every day we spend together perfect,

and it is perfect - as perfect as perfect can be.

You're such a handsome gentleman; I love the way you walk

so confidently with such an ardent stride.

I love the walks we take, I love the you look into my eyes,

and I absolutely love the way you kiss me -

as to draw my life closer to yours in our final beautiful union.

I love you sweet dearest, and I hold your heart with mine.

Yours.

---

To my one and only,

I write to you out of desperation; I cannot bear to be without you.

I fear our love dwindles as the days go on.

I think about you as I wake and through my days, and before I blow out

the candle to close my day, I pray you dream of me as I dream of you.

I miss you frightfully, and fear your loss of contact,

and my days grow mournfully dismal as I slip further into a melancholic state.

I miss seeing your beautiful glow when you wake in the morning,

and I would give anything to feel your touch.

I spend my time wondering what you're doing, daydreaming until the day

when I can finally feel your love once again,

and I long to simply kiss you.

Nothing would make me happier.

I will love you forever.

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  • Frozen Angel
    July 25, 2007

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    I'm not sure what you want me to comment on so... It's sweet and beautiful with a ton of emotion. I liked it. Great job!

    *Frozen Angel*


  • Taylor Renee
    June 26, 2007

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    I really like this. I think it was beautiful and you did a great job on it.
    It was such a powerful poem and it's so heartfelt. I really loved it.
    Great job!
    xoxo
    Keep up the great work!
    Tay