Dearest Love,
I write to you this letter out of the fondness of my heart.
My feelings for you have dwelled within my heart as our affair has progressed,
and I feel that it is time I finally told you how I truly feel
about you.
I love the way you make me feel beautiful,
and how perfect you try to make every day we spend together perfect,
and it is perfect - as perfect as perfect can be.
You're such a handsome gentleman; I love the way you walk
so confidently with such an ardent stride.
I love the walks we take, I love the you look into my eyes,
and I absolutely love the way you kiss me -
as to draw my life closer to yours in our final beautiful union.
I love you sweet dearest, and I hold your heart with mine.
Yours.
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To my one and only,
I write to you out of desperation; I cannot bear to be without you.
I fear our love dwindles as the days go on.
I think about you as I wake and through my days, and before I blow out
the candle to close my day, I pray you dream of me as I dream of you.
I miss you frightfully, and fear your loss of contact,
and my days grow mournfully dismal as I slip further into a melancholic state.
I miss seeing your beautiful glow when you wake in the morning,
and I would give anything to feel your touch.
I spend my time wondering what you're doing, daydreaming until the day
when I can finally feel your love once again,
and I long to simply kiss you.
Nothing would make me happier.
I will love you forever.
The message overall; the artistic quality isn't necessarily behind the uniqueness of the language.
Comments
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I'm not sure what you want me to comment on so... It's sweet and beautiful with a ton of emotion. I liked it. Great job!
*Frozen Angel* -
I really like this. I think it was beautiful and you did a great job on it.
It was such a powerful poem and it's so heartfelt. I really loved it.
Great job!
xoxo
Keep up the great work!
Tay



