Three too many by karmaxEdit

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Karma comes around I must add

Tell me what's the dilly silly........

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• Beginning - Is it slow or lacking in pace and punch?
• Beginning - Does it engage and draw you into the rest of the story?
• Ending - Did all plot elements resolve?
• Ending - Was it climactic or anti-climactic? Was it exciting?
• Characters - Are they realistic?
• Characters - Were you sympathetic, or were they one-dimensional. Did they feel real?
• Plot - Does it hold your interest?
• Plot - Were there weak elements?
• Plot - Could it do more? Was it fascinating?
• Plot - How was the pace?
• Language - Are there awkward phrasings?
• Language - Is sentence length natural and does it result in an easy to read flow?
• Dialog - How realistic was it? Did it feel like something you would say or hear?
• Dialog - Did it help to deepen the characters?

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