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I have learned the true meaning of love

I don't know what you look like

Or if you are telling me the truth

But feel i can trust you with my heart.

You say you love me.

I say I love you back

And I mean it with very ounce of my heart

I know you do.

I know you care

Every conversation leaves me breathless

Aching with want and need

So I wait until the invite pops up

And stare a the ceiling.

Waiting for my computer lover.

Please tell me what you think(tell the truth)

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  • Frozen Angel
    July 25, 2007

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    I liked how you described love. Very few can get the feeling captured into words. Good job. I loved it.

    *Frozen Angel*


  • Blackwings
    June 21, 2007

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    OK I will! Nice job I LOVE the poeticness (I know it isn't a word but I don't care, I'm making my own dictionary! Our words need some life breathed into them!) But anyways, I liked the love base you put it on and built it up from there nice job I really liked it! It flowed sooo nicely


    • jadedlilies
      July 3, 2007
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      Thanks!!!

      Thanks for commenting!!!I completely agree.Words are dull now.But I hope you are well and happy.Miss you!!!! Great job on Nights at Borders Part 14!!!!!!!!Loved it!!! Take care!!!