My life is too lame to even care about.
Let alone someone to die with me
Or even watch.
I'd lay there crying as I slipped away
I wouldn't even cry if someone sat there crying
Their tears the ones on my face
Saying that they loved me
I'm sitting here writing this trying not to cry
Because I know that noone loves me enough to watch me die
I'd sit there as my tears choked me
Laying on my bed
I'd die because of my tears
Tears that nobody loves me
I'd have my stereo blasting
Probably Hero Comes Back
Would be playing
Because I know there's no such thing
As heros,or them coming back
If there were heros,
I would've found one
But no.
I know my destiny
My fate
I sound like Neji but I know it's true
I know I'm going to die alone
And I'm afraid
I want to die with my best friends
I want them by my side
But no
I will die alone
Because it is fate
Destiny
My greatest fear is going to become
My reality
Author notes
Option Four: Greatest Fear.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lya72YFvEpM
A contest entry
- Interesting Options by FRIENDSfanatic.
175 points, ended June 24, 2007, 11 entries
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yes sad
nice song, i could have never written it any better. i hope you do well on your contest! You need to get gold!!!
-maddie
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I LOVE the song!! WANT TO STEAL IT FOR TEAM 13!!! GAAH!
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Sweetie,That's the Shippuden Opening!
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I know...!
Aya: Yeah, she watches it TOO much. I need to get into it somehow...
Chibi: It's the SONG I luv, and the movie's cool, too. Song ROX! *needs to download* -
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I got to see one of the movies.
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that was very heartfelt, and very powerful. It was full of emotions, but i think you could fix up the writing a little, just add some more descriptions and put in some more intersting phrases instead of saying the word "tears" over and over, I think you could be more creative about the way you write.
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Thnx
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How about the title be: I Fear My Destiny?
Well, anyway, I think this is very well put and the emotions come out very, very clearly. But, know one thing, I'm pretty sure you're not going to die alone without any friends, because know it or not, believe it or not, there are people out there that care about you though they may not show it and though you may not even know it. Your best friend will be there for you, in life and in death. If they're not...well, then they're not your best friend are they? ^_~
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Thnx Siby but I'm pretty dure all my best friends are to busy to be there.They all have lives I don't.Thnx fr the title I'll use it and put you under something.
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*gasps* I'm a collaborator =D ^_^
Aw come on. Though you and your best friend may have different lives, they're not going to ditch you at your final moment. -
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Not ditch,just be somwhere else not knowing I'm dieing.
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Shouldn't you call them and tell them or get someone to notify them or something? =(
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.....I would be dying in my room.My parents aren't always home and my sisters aren't either.1 how would I get to the phone 2who would notify them?
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Why would you die in your room? o__O
Spend the last few minutes of your life getting to the phone and screaming at someone to get their *bunnies* over to your house right away XD
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