the blood red moon part 5

She couldn't comprehend what he was saying. How could she have an ancient power inside her. that was impossible. "i'm not special. i don't have powers. i'm a nobody, and you guys are just playing a prank on me." snow jumped up and ran into the woods behind her, and tried to remember how she had gotten here. she wanted to go home. she wanted to do her normal chores and forget about all of this. she had thought that maybe she had finally found someone that cared but i guess not. she walked blindly through the woods. she had no idea how to get home. all she knew was that she wasn't going back to that clearing aain. so she kept on walking aimlessly through the woods. about two hours later she walked right back to where she had started. she was exausted from walking to much. she was already late and shewas never going to get all her chores done if she didn't get home soon. she was starting to get tired. how long had she really been walking. she had no idea. finally sleep got the better of her and she layed down on the ground and fell into a deep sleep. later that night she woke up with a start. she was in a stange room. she was laying on a bed with black satin sheets and a crimson red comforter. the bed was a canopy with blue curtins and purple pillows made of velvet. she sat up quickly and felt a sharp pain in her head. she layed back down as the door opened. liam came over to her bad and checked to see if she was awake. when he saw she was he smiled and said," hello snow how are you feeling tonight?" he looked so beautiful to her. she thought he looked like an angel. "what, how long have i been sleeping?" he looked at her and said," three days. but it was because of your fever." she looked at him in shock. "i've been asleep for three days! oh my god i'm going to be in so much trouble. i haven't done any of my chores." she started to cry and tried to look away when nathan walked in. he was at her side in a moments time. he held her while she cried and stroked her hair. "its ok snow. you won't get in trouble. i'll make sure of that." liam was sitting on the other side of her watching her tears fall. "i'll protect you." he said as he stood up to leave nathan and snow alone. as he left he turned and said," dinners at seven." then he left and shut the door. snow had stoped crying and was resting her head on nathans shoulder when she heard him ask," so what would you like to do?" she lifted her head and looked at him. "what is there to do around here?" he smiled and replied," well theres lots to do. we could go hiking or swimming or lay out on the grass. or we could go see all the animals and flowers." he was standing up and stretching. " want to come with me snow?" he said holding out his hand to help her up. " i guess so. where are we going first?" snow asked standing up. "well first you get cleaned up, i'll have one of the maids bring in a nice gown for you to wear. what are your favorite colors?" she looked at herself. she looked horrible. "black and red." she said going over to the mirror. she sat at the small chair in front of the mirror and looked at herself. she looked about the same as before. she couldn't comprehend why these people where helping her or protect her.

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this is the next part of the story......sorry it took so long to post it.........hope every one likes it........and yes i know it would be better if it was in paragraphs but i'm not any good at doing that kind of thing..........i usually have other people do that for me.......caylierose

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  • DarkOneShadow
    October 28, 2007

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    I like this part of the story, her discovering her powers and having people protect her, and nurture her... well done

    DarkOne


  • Midnightmare
    June 18, 2007

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    Nice work

    i enjoyed your story, but as easy as it is to do, there was a substantial amount of punctuation and spelling errors.
    it was, however, a delight to read.
    NightDweller.