you spiral

fade
to repeat
kaleidoscope eyes.
your
life a coil -
you rummage in
dreams.

dreams in rummage,
you
coil a life -
your
eyes kaleidoscope,
repeat to
fade.

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got a mirror?

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  • asthray.heart
    June 12, 2007
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    this was good, I like that you simply mirrored the words and worked well

    Thanks for entering and goodluck

    Lady Madeline.