Dads are a lot like water
you might not think so now
but after I read you this poem
you will understand
water can pull or push you
with lots of force
just like any dad can
lift about anything
Water can eat away a rock
or even a whole city
a Dad too can eat any food
just to make sure there aren't any leftovers
Water can be peaceful
and soothe your mind
just like a Dad can hold you
when you start to cry
Water can take any shape
the sky is the limit
just like a Dad's
mind is open to all possibilities
Water is refreshing
after being in the sun
just like a Dad's love is
after being away for so long
Water can be anything
peaceful, mad, fun, refreshing,
any color
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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his is a very sweet write a beautiful dedication to your father, i smiled when i read about the dad eating any food so there would be no leftovers
a lovely poem
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awww I found this really touching and sweet. Its very true also how fathers can take on many forms, as can water. My dad takes on the "mad" formation most of the time and has just recently moved out. I think this helped me see some things so thanks for writing this.
Keep up the great work
Emma
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