Dad

Dads are a lot like water
you might not think so now
but after I read you this poem
you will understand

water can pull or push you
with lots of force
just like any dad can
lift about anything

Water can eat away a rock
or even a whole city
a Dad too can eat any food
just to make sure there aren't any leftovers

Water can be peaceful
and soothe your mind
just like a Dad can hold you
when you start to cry

Water can take any shape
the sky is the limit
just like a Dad's
mind is open to all possibilities

Water is refreshing
after being in the sun
just like a Dad's love is
after being away for so long

Water can be anything
peaceful, mad, fun, refreshing,
any color,beautiful....
just like you Dad

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  • bedovich
    June 12, 2007
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    oh sweeet great imagery and imagination especially with the opening part