Childhood Summer

Warm sun at my back

There is nothing that I lack

A splash of water comes my way

Give me a minute I'll be back at play

A clean dive into the water

Playing sharks and minnows I go in for the slaughter

Sun is setting time to get dry

Get the jar ready for the firefly

Night has come I can go no more

I fall asleep content dreaming of what tomorrow has in store

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  • Rawrr.
    March 30
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    Beautiful! And honestly this makes me happy just thinking about it (:


  • bedovich
    June 12, 2007
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    nice summer nights especially if u r in aus its so greattt


  • asthray.heart
    June 11, 2007

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    Awww this was awesome as I love summer nights like that, and then the way you just fall asleep

    Thanks for entering and good luck. This was a beautiful peice of Summer imagery


    Lady Madeline.