My lovely guitar
It music goes to very far
My guitar, like my heart
From which melodies start
• Strings like veins
Stitched to it like chains
Like my heart it beats
Music and rhyme it repeats
• My guitar so dear
Creates dreams with no frontiers
Strings rattle in charm
A heart beating underneath my arm
• Every time I feel so sad
It comes in rhymes to clad
My tearful eyes in chime
With it’s magical rhyme
• Golden glittering strings
From which tune springs
The cause of my glory
The keeper of my love story
Author notes
hun i dedicate this poem to you and to you guitar btw i drew a guitar today on a canvas after i came from my exams i show it to you later
A contest entry
- Haha by pathetic.
170 points, ended June 12, 2007, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I thought this poem was good. The rhyming seemed a little forced but the concept was good. I liked it.
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I liked this. Sweet and cute. Good job. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. God Bless!
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This is a cute poem. Guitar's are so hard to play lol. I used to take lessons. Good Job.
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Thank you hun This was beautiful, you got a soft spot with my guitar and I looked forward to seeing this picture of a guitar you drew. I hope your exams went well.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
Ebbz <3 ♥
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