The fire grew with the coming wind
Tangled in the lies you spun
Treachery comes with the dangers done
You follow with bleeding heart and broken wing
Hoping for forgiveness here
We are warned not to gaze upon those who betrayed
But I was tangled in your web again
A haunting: a burning burrowed in soulless eyes
Your heart cries.
I die.
Don't have to comment just enjoy it.
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i liked this..so much drama packed into something so short..makes it really powerful..nice job
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Thank you so much for the comment.
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Poetic certainly...why is it in a "story" pulldown. I am bothered by the break in the music with: "For forgiven"...and "A haunting: A burning...etc."
Just somewhat subjective. Still dramatic; poetic!
Best,
GA
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Thanks for the comment. The pause is for dramatic effect and the words for appropriate imagery.
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