Lovers Prelude Chapter 8 (Jimmy's Perpective)

Tonight my band had a show at  One and Only's. It was a blast.  I thought  I saw that girl from my precalc class in  the audience with  some of her friends.  She looked so goregeous in her khakis and bright  orange shirt. She seemed to be really getting in   to the music  a lot and i though she looked so cute the way she was bobbing her head in time to the music.  After   we finished our set  there a breif intermission to let the other band set up.  As soon as I finished putting away my guitar  I spotted the girl from my  precalc class with her  friends  at the compilementary snacks table.  I tapped her on the shoulder ever so casually.  She turned around slowly and stared at me.  " Hey, what's I'm I'm Jimmy Richards, i  think we have precalc together,  You enjoyin' the show?"  She swollowed the  gulp of her soda  that she had just taken and said  "Yeah  i'm having a  blast!"  She seemed lost on words for a  few seconds.   "What's your name?"   "Dianna  Rivers,  she said  extending her  hand to me   "Nice to meet you  Jimmy" She smiled.     "See you around  school." I said as i took her han and shook it briskly." 1

And that night I met the girl i'd been in love with for  four months. Dianna Rivers.    I knew  that somehow were made for eachother... i just needed to figure out exactly how.2

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another  chapter  from  Jimmy's pov

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  • February 28, 2005
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    I was wondering if this is all fiction or if it is based on true life at all. Whether it be your own or someone you know.
    It makes me think of my highschool days. That to me is a good thing.
    I like this very much.
    ~J

  • Samplette
    February 18, 2005
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    I like your style. It is pretty cool reading about a young romance. Brings back groups of memories. Ones I had forgotten even happened. It's kinda wierd, like a whole lifetime ago...
    S♥m