The birds chirped outside Dianna's window and Dianna rolled over and looked at her alarm clock. 9:45! The morning was half gone and she had a lot of homework to do before she was to go out that night. Tonight! Girls night out! What she'd been looking forward to since Tuesday at lunch time when the plans first started being made. She bounded down the stair and ate her breakfast and then went outside to take a walk. After her walk she hit the books right away so she had time to get ready for the evening's events. She pulled out her biology and precalc binders and intently got immersed in her work she briefly forgot about Jimmy. She took a brief two hours nap and then bolted up from her bed after realizing it was 3:30. She jumped in the shower and spent the whole 10 minutes of her shower humming to herself and thinking 'Tonight is gonna be THE NIGHT, and if I meet Jimmy i won't make a fool of myself in front of him.' She got out of the shower combed her hair nd got dressed. She glanced at herself in the mirror 'Stunning she thought now all I need is a little bit of make up'.' She went in to room and began to ruffle through her make up drawer. She pulled out her favorite strawberry flavored lipstick. "Mmmm strawberries, she thought to herself 'Jimmy definitely wouldn't wanna miss out on kissing these voluptuous lips.' She heard a car horn honk and looked at the clock 4:45 right on time She jumped into her shoes,grabbed her purse and shut the door behind her and got in to the passenger seat of Abby's car. Abby smiled at her. "You ready?" she said "Oh yeah I've been ready since Wednesday, I'm so pumped." Dianna returned the smile and the drove off toward Subway where they'd be meeting their friends for dinner @ 5. Dinner was brief and soon enough they were on their way to One and Only's. They made a brief stop at a convenience store to by some bottles of water because they figured they'd be screming really loud once Jimmy's band came on. They arrived at One and Olly's exactly at 7pm, entered the venue got their hands stamped and found a space of floor sit on. The opening band was OK but Dianna was getting more and more anxious to see Jimmy in all his musical glory. The opening band finished their set and announced No Man's Land. The whole crowd was up on their feet instantly cheering. They started playing there first number and Dianna found herself bobbing her head to the music and really getting into it. All of sudden people started moshing and Dianna and her friends suddenly found themselves in the middle of an incredibly huge mosh pit close to the area that was in front of the stage. Dianna couldn't help but look into Jimmy's eyes enthralled by his talents of mastering guitar riffs. Before they started the next song Jimmy went up to the mike and said " Has any one noticed it's getting a tad hot in here?" Then he took off his shirt and all the girls in the audience screamed but Dianna screamed the loudest because well she just thought that Jimmy looked attractive with his shirt off. She could see that he had been working out because his muscles looked like those of one of those models you see on the cover of the swimsuit issue of Sports Illustrated. 1
No Man's Land ended their set and there was a brief intermission to let the other band set up. Dianna and her friends went over the to the complimentary food table and got some brownies and punch. Suddenly Dianna felt someone tap her on the shoulder. She turned around slowly and noticed that Jimmy was standing right behind her.2
"Hey I'm Jimmy i think we're in precalc together. Enjoying the show so far?"3
For a minute Dianna was speechless she couldn't believe that Jimmy was talking to her. She swallowed the gulp of soda she'd just taken and said "Yeah I'm having a blast. Your band is amazing!" Dianna said4
'And so are you.' she added silently. 5
"My name is Jimmy Richards, what's yours?" 6
Dianna was still in shock that Jimmy was actually talking to her. "I'm Dianna Rivers and yes we do have precalc together." 7
"Nice to meet you Dianna, I'll see you around school." and then Jimmy left to go mingle with some of the other club goers8
Dianna felt like she was in heaven.9
Author notes
The part of the story where things start to intesfy a little bit. dun dun dun
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Comments
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Excitement is brewing in the tummy of your main character. She is so excited and your words allow me to feel that excitement. I am truly enjoying your story line. I think you have a lot of talent.
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This is really a cool story. My interest is still peaked, but I have to bookmark it and comeback later or tomorrow, but I will be back. This chapter had another@. I guess to use that symbol when you're telling time...anyway. I can relate to this a bit. I dated a drummer in a band before. Was engaged for a while. It didn't work out, but I am really glad about that. I like the life I have, and I couldnt have lived all my life the way I was. Of course I am talking a score and more ago...lol Yes I am old. 47...May 20 I'll be 48. Hope you don't mind my comments. I do like your story and look forward to returning to "Lovers Prelude"
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