The sky was th crimson red of a bleeding wound. The falling snow was heavily laced with filth as if tainted with the morbid reflections of this earth's inhabitants. Among the ruins f this metropolis stirred the suddle limb of a child barely past infancy. He sailed across the city leaving a trail of small footsteps that were subsequently buried under th heavy heaps of snow the same way the Reaper embellishes all traces of scores of lives that once roamed this earth.1
But this bleak scenery didn't seem to upset our little solider who persisted on with such stamina unfamiliar t his frail body. Neither that nor the looks of disgust bestowed on him by some pedestrians lessen his enthusiasm. In his hands was a small parcel which most likely was a book. But to this little boy,it was more than a book. This book was worth five months of mopping floors at the mall after school. It was endless endless dozens of spills that momentarily mirrored his angelic face before being blurred. It was that ache down his spine for all these hours he slaved.2
None of that mattered. Nothing will ever matter after tonight. Tonight his father's eyes will light up again! Time will never erase the memory of his father's face that day when the bank came and evacuated their home. There he stood a ghost of a man as he watched his life being trolled away. His face took n an even paler shade of white when his book collection was being loaded. The only passion that consoled him after the death of his wife. Well that and that little boy that stared up to him with brown eyes full of adoration. Eyes s full of divine affection very similar to the look in his eyes at this very moment. Tonight he will catch a glimpse of an era long gone but much missed. All the bullying and insults were drowned and demolished in his quest, yes quest, to bring happiness t the most important person in his life.3
Such happy reflections were passing through his mind. A spark of content building up inside his heart kept him going on. The unemployment check arrived early this month so his father won't have to cast his head down to that filthy landlord. The old lady next door will have a ht dinner ready and her apathy never failed to turn a couple of mouthfuls into a feast.4
The tall skyscrapers started to give way to the modest alleys of the gutter. His father laid asleep drought with pneumonia. With a kiss he was awaken to start into the eyes of his child.5
There was a feast that night. There was dinner to be consumed. There was gifts to be given. There was the father's delight with a gesture so pure and selfless that not even malady could cast a shadow on. There was the love adjoint two souls. There was more happiness and bliss in two rooms in the gutter than a mansion adorned with treasures but void of sympathy. There was peace.6
Author notes
well when i started to write this one , i wanted it to be all dark and stuff. then i realized that there are good things in life that we miss all teh time. we should pay more attention to those.
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Comments
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(I'll just use Pegasus's first impression and say amazed instead of drooling over my keyboard ;p)
Sanaa you have outdone yourself in this.. I hope there will be a second chapter or something.. this is just too good to be left like this!
Great job
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unforgetable
mouth wide open
well sanaa i am happy to have read this story i only have to say that this story is one on my fav stories now itsrealy good and yeah at first it sounded alittle dark but then i had this wonderfull feeling of happieness and i was reading this story at a classical song so the mood was perfect i realy loved this story i don't know why but i couldn't remove my eyes away fromthe screen for some reason(it was great) icouldn't think of any thing else but the story and you know me i always write short comment but this time i still don't feel as if i did justice to this story...if only i could say more but sadly words can't describe its perfection this is unforgetable -
Wonderful.

