"This is so not fair!" Jessica screamed.
"What is not fair? That i wont let you hang out with your drugee and alcoholic boyfriend?" mom yelled back.
"He is PERFECT! I love him and he loves me! So get over it!" Jessie yelled.
Her mom threw the plate she was holding on the floor.
"He is not for you, Jessie! If you want to live in my house then you better follow my rules!" her mom concluded.
Jessie stopmed into her room and yelled, "I hate you!" and then she slammed the door. Jessie's mom started balling. She was balling because Jessie had never said that to her before so it hit her really hard.
"Pssst! Jessie!" someone called from Jessie's window. It was Jessie's boyfriend, Ryan. "Wanna go out?" Ryan asked. Jessie looked at her door and said,"Yea.Let's go.
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I like how you showed the rage between the mother and daughter, but I think you should put in more emotion when the mother starts crying. I also think the story should be extended. Great job!
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I agree with SailorVenus.
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I agrre with Sailor Venus.
and yes a second part is a good plan -
This perfectly shows how some parents and children misunderstood each other and not see eye to eye. Sometimes, we, the children, do not see how our parents just want to look out for us... on the other hand, the parents could also not see that their children should be allowed to live and choose for themselves - the mistakes we make will be ours, and hopefully, we would learn from that.
This feels a bit unfinished ^_^ you COULD add more for the story
Thanks for sharing this with us
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Should i make a second one?
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