Politicians
Making
Wrong
Decisions.
Never mind.
A contest entry
- Short Poetry by Bitter Irony.
165 points, ended June 15, 2007, 26 entries
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Comments
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Ha ha.. it's amazing how statisically bad they are at making deciscions, the ending reminds me about how no one can really talk about politics without a great debate happening..
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ok..never been that much into to politics...and i really don't get this poem..sorry
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I...don't seem to get it, really.
I think the 'never mind', at the end through me off a bit.
Oh well, I hate politics anyways.. -
Hm. This poem is interesting, but it doesn't really seem to express a full idea. What is the "never mind" at the end supposed to be saying? I think you could expand on this a little more (not too much, of course, but a little): I'd like to see where you could go with it.
beginning: 1, language: 2, plot: 2, ending: 2, dialog: 2, characters: 1.
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