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Palin-what?
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Zamboni Opera
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Zamboni Opera
on Jul 28 2011 02:13 PM
, Jul 28, 2011, last seen
on Oct 24 04:44 PM
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Thinking it would be a fun way to break up the workday tedium, the employee wrote her name backward on her name tag.
Anna wasn't a very bright young woman.
By Pat Gilders, © 2011, All rights reserved.
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