The Giggles


Alright, you may notice a lot of my poems are funny. I am trying now to make a REAL laugh out of you...I try and try. Some day i want to make you guys crack up so hard. I'll do my best in this. If this is not funny to many people please tell me why and i will fix this wonderful piece i am making...1



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So Please wait for the next master piece. I will not make it yet tonight because it is late. I also have to be studying what makes people laugh. Have a good day and see ya. Hope you love my funny piece.3



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  • bedovich
    June 5, 2007
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    yayyyyyyy: cant wait hun

  • LadyOfFate silver member
    June 4, 2007
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    oi.... I can hardly tell. the background and the word color are blindly hard to read. but it is nicely written. though I can't tell what is funny. maybe we have different senses of humor. please change the colors so you don't blind your readers. thank you


    • Frozen Fire Poet
      June 5, 2007
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      i fixed it but i did not write anything funny yet. Read it again. I have to search for what people like before i could ever write anything


  • Embitter
    June 4, 2007
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    OW OWW...My eyes.. Brightness.. overwhelms...

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