You hear my calling
What I am saying
My tears are falling
With your words of love
You buried my heart alive
Words that wounded my heart
Keeping me and life apart
When you found out
My life is short soon to puff out
You denied your love
And another love you did find
You left my wounds exposed
Without any cure to mend
With your pitiless heart
You dragged me to my grave
Once you were my love
In this cruel world
Once you youre my love
In this unlucky life
Oh God , where are you
Why you didnt hear my prayers
And you had to take me apart
From my love
Nothing with parting only
But you took it away with death
You gave me life
Why you took it so fast?
You gave me love
But why a sick heart?
Is it luck that you gave me birth?
A birth with an infection
You gave me life
And a life to a disease within me
You took me away
With my moms tearful eyes
Sobs wails, mourns and cries
Buried my heart
Along with memories
Remaining on my heart forever
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A contest entry
- Watev!! by asthray.heart.
1100 points, ended June 20, 2007, 56 entries
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This was really sad, Pete. It made me cry. It was very well written. I lovells you big brother!
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Well done but oh so sad, gies a happy one , Please, need cheered up,
Regards
Helen -
Thanks cuddle buddy good luck and thnks for entering
Ebb
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so sad 
I hope that you will be okay...It sounds personal. Very nicely written.
The pain that it holds within shows through an inner pain. It flows together nicely and seeps into the readers mind.
Keep up the great work and I hope you will be okay
z to you
Em
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Naww baby this was sad, very sad. I hope you are okai, this was an emotional peice here.
Thanks for sharing babe as always very charming read.
Ebbz
xox
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