"Danielle!" At the sound of my name I spin around to see my best
friend Elizabeth running towards me from the door. She must have just arrived also. "Elizabeth!" I cry happily as she jumps into my arms in a big hug. She snuggles her head into the crook of my neck and makes me slightly nervous. "I'm so happy you made it, Ella." She says, just above a whisper. It was hard to hear her over the blaring music from the DJ and crowds of students talking.
"C'mon, lets dance!" She says, and she grabs me by the hand and leads me onto the dance floor. That makes me nervous as well. We had promised that we'd dance together, but that's not what I'm worried about. Sometimes, Elizabeth makes me nervous that way, because I sometimes wonder if she has a crush on me. It's hard for me to admit it, but I sometimes think that I might like her as well. But then, that makes me think that maybe she has noticed that and is just teasing me. Either way, she still likes getting close to me and basically gets me nervous pretty easily.
Just as we walk onto the dance floor, a slow song comes on.
Wonderful... just great. She hangs her arms over my shoulders, and
then rests her head on my shoulder. I am hoping that she won't hear my heart pounding, because her ear is right above it. As we step side to side, the ends of our dresses sway in a beating rhythm, and noticing this makes me even more nervous. I can feel myself starting to shake, and I try as hard as I can to calm myself down, but it's not use. I'm shaking against my will, and I can't do anything about it. Elizabeth brings her head up and starts speaking. "Daniellie, why are you shaki-"
"Lets go get some pizza!" I say, a little bit to fast, as I drag her off the stage and toward the pizza table. The other slow dancers don't even notice our departure, thank god we had chosen a spot on the edge of the dance floor.
"Here, have some pizza!" I almost scream as I stuff my own mouth, to keep me from having to say anything more. "Umm...Okay.." She says as she takes the paper plate from my hand and lifts the piece of pizza off of it. I scan all of the tables and spot one full of our friends.
"Oh, hey, look 'Lizabeth! All our friends are over there," I walk away slightly fast, hoping to get away from her for just a second. I arrive at the table and our friends, Jackie, Barbara, and Grace start to giggle. "You and Elizabeth were daaaancing!" They chirp. "Hey, have you guys had some pizza?" I say, trying to switch the subject. Just then, Elizabeth catches up. "Danielle, you didn't wait for me!" She teased. "I'm sorry." I said, even though I wasn't particularly sorry at all. "'t's okay." She said. I sat down at the table and started to eat the rest of my pizza. She sat down next to me, a little too close, so I
got up and sat on the tabler, pretending that it was more comfortable. All of my friends, including Elizabeth, start jabbering about some weird topic, but I'm not paying attention. I pretend to be listening, nodding now and then and throwing in a fake laugh every once in a while. I am still shaking, only not as visible as before. I throw in another fake giggle, but instantly regret it. I giggled, but no one had been laughing. Suddenly it feels as if all of my blood has drained to my big toe. "What's so funny?" Asks Grace. "Oh...nothing... it's just... I though of something funny... that happened... yesterday..." I said in a desperate cover up. "Ella..." Elizabeth says as she rises from her chair. My breath quickens. She rises up to the table and puts one on either side of me, practically sitting in my lap. My heart is pounding, I can barely breathe, and the shaking is back. The rhythmetic beat of the DJ's music seems to fade as does all other noise in the room. "Yes...?" I say, trying not to panic. She leans towards me, and I lean back, and then there is a pause. "Dani..." Shes says as she lifts her hand up and plays with a stray lock of my hair. She has so many nicknames for me, Ella, Dani, Eela..... I let out a deep breath and attempt to calm down. She starts leaning foreward again, so I start leaning backward again.
Then I am laying down on the table, and I can't lean back anymore, But Elizabeth keeps going foreward.
She presses her mouth to mine, and my panicking is gone. I hear gasps from various classmates around us, and I can practically feel the awkward stares of my friends on my skin. But I don't care, all I care about is Elizabeth.... One of the dance chaperones saunters over and literally picks Elizabeth up from under the arms and lifts her up off of me, gently setting her down on her feet on the floor next to him. "Break it up, break it up!" The strong man says. "No kissing at the dance."
I blush slightly and and sit down in a chair like a normal person, instead of on the table. Elizabeth sits next to me and we both start finishing what is left of our slightly chilled pizza slices.
Elizabeth and I didn't really talk much for the rest of that night. But I do know that every time I looked at her, I could see the laughter in her eyes, especially as we were leaving.
At least I made it out alive.
Author notes
THIS DIDNT HAPPEN (unlike most my sruff)
okai, so, personally, I didn't really like this one... x.x
It was a good idea i think but it just wasn't written well.
I was thinking of the eighth grade dance that's coming up and this just popped into my head.
*shrugs*
The line spacing is really freaking messed up so please just deal with it.
Also, the POV is messed up in some places, I think, and I'm sorry if you notice it.
Basically i think i was just getting my ideas down this time and maybe some other time I can edit && revise it and make it all better.
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hee, I thought this was really cute ^_^ I likeit that the chaperone person just came a nd lifeted her up as if she weighed nothign


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You say though instead of thought when you explain her nervous giggle.
But your right it is a good story, needs an edit, it is very sweet though.
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srry, typo.
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thats a really cute story!!!!
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not good? Are you fuckin crazy? This rocks! It's one of the best writes I've read in a damn long time! I LOVE THIS!!!!! *wishes she could bookmark this like you could before they changed the site
* this is totally awesome, please please please keep it up!
~*~goth&sweet - Bo~*~

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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really, you liked it that much? ^_^ Thanks, then!!!
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