this place

I'm dead.1

Floating in a dark void.2

No one else is here,3

I'm alone.4

As if I'm the only one who ever existed,5

But I know I'm not,I remember them...the people I mean.6

When I was still alive there were people all around me,7

and I felt loved....I think,Its getting harder to remember things.8

I'm starting to forget everything I ever knew.9

I feel nothing here,10

Not hope,joy,sadness or even pain.11

Just scared and lonely.12

It's not Heaven or Hell,I'm just here,13

in this place,for eternity. 14

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  • Darkeyes
    October 22, 2004
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    I know this is a older piece but I liked it alot!Good job!

  • PinkPassion
    July 12, 2004
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    It's a perfect description of being in limbo, inbetween, but not really caring. Nice work!