Walter leaned back in his leather recliner and yelled into the kitchen, "Bring your dad a beer!". 1
He flicked the TV on and flipped through the channels quickly. Becoming bored he picked up the news paper and began to read the sports section. A small brunette girl appeared in the door way. 2
"You aren't my father," she said gritting her teeth.3
"What did you say to me, girl?" Walter questioned, lowering his paper slowly.4
"You heard me," she replied calmly glaring into his eyes.5
Walter watched her with a look of surprise and anger. This was the first time she had spoken out against him. Walter moved with agility despite his large size. Raising his right hand, he smacked the girl across the face. An eerie silence followed the deafening sound of the assault as they both gazed at each other, waiting for the other to move first.6
"You watch your tone with me, Katrina, or I'll make you wish you had died in the car accident like your father." Walter finally growled through his teeth. Turning on his heel, Walter stormed out of the living room and out the front door. Katrina stood silent as the car engine started and slowly faded away with her stepfather. Tears of anger filled her eyes as she walked to the bathroom. The beginnings of a dark bruise were forming on her cheek, as she stared into the mirror. Her normal bright green eyes were dark with anger and pain. Happiness had vanished from them four years ago with the death of her father. Only thirteen; yet, she was already a 'mother' to her younger brother. Their own mother, an alcoholic, was rarely home and oblivious to most of the abuse going on in the home. 7
Wiping away the last of her tears, Katrina said a silent pray for her younger brother, Richard, wishing that he would be able to escape Walter's grasp.8
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Just tell me what you think. I'm not done.
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OMG I'm in tears again!. My own father is very abusive and my mother is an alcoholic as well so she could care less, In fact she finds the shit he does insanely funny. My little brother I was having to raise until things got so bad here that I sent him to live with a friend. Again, amazing piece or work!
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Great
Awesome writing, very descriptive. Can't wait to read more. -
I can't wait to see what it is like finished. Feel like I just watched part of a movie and it's to be continued. May not make that much sense, but yeah.
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i kinda got that feeling.....im sorry this happened to you....its so horrible how people can be such 'monsters' you know?....well i hope youre alright....good luck with life!!
~pigmies -
It may seem real because it is...well anyway...thanks for the nice comment!
Katrina
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this is really good so far....its so real....as i was reading it i felt like it was happening to me....im just weird like that but i really did get a personal vison from this story if you get what i mean....cant wait to hear more!!!best of wishes...
~pigmies -
Got right to my heart. Very good writer you are. You have very emotional writing and show things about real life occurences. I'm sorry if that actually happened to you. -Swallow
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*hugs* Aww Katrina.... this must be diffucult.. I admire you for it it's an amazing write.. I can feal your anger through it. I look forward to reading the rest. Is that asshole still bothering you? I hope not... he's a fucking creep >.< Take care... Blessed Be
~Amy
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Thanks.
I do intend to write more of the story, I'm glad to hear you want to read more of it.
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This is really good so far. I really do hope to hear more from you on this story. So if you should decide to continue.lemme know
Awesome write
OD
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