She`ll be the first to admit that she`s not perfect.
Her life`s a wreck,
& the only thing holding her up is the hope
that it`ll get better.
She`s got some friends who would die for her,
& she has friends that would kill her, given the chance.
She has the mental stability of a psychiatric patient,
& the constant drama that surrounds her doesn`t help.
She`s lost all of the people she depended on,
whether it be death, or betrayal.
Despite everything that has happened to her,
the reason she keeps hanging on is the hope
that it will all get better.
Author notes
my favorite band of all time is Hinder and I absolutely love by the way - by hinder as well.
A contest entry
- What you live by by heartfullofvenom.
210 points, ended August 21, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
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I think that describes anyone with a creative bent. You have to be that kind of person to be able to make something wonderful.
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I will take this as a series of quotes lol. Good job on this. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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hi, sorry but this is 103 words long and can not be counted in this contest, no matter how good, sorry.
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Amazing
Lovely, very good. That pretty much sumed up a lot of peoples lives. And wonderful wording.
good luck
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Hehe, I decided to read something of yours after telling you my love of your hair!
I liked this. It reminds me of a song...that I can't think of the name of.
Anyways.
It was good.
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This was great, describes u nd me both... DW, it has 2 get better sumtime, I refuse 2 believe it won't, coz if it doesn't, I don't kno wat I will do...
This was well written, and altho short, very good.
Keep up the good work
Luv MDH xoxo
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In a very bleak world, sometimes hope is all we have, unfortunately.
I really do hope things will get better, and I think you may have to take a leap yourself to ever change the tide. One thing I've learned is that things aren't usually given to you, you have to get them yourself. Somehow you will have to break free of your prison and explore the world
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Wow so powerful. Very nicely written. Its very sad to think that all someone has is hope.
Your friends would die for you , don't think any would kill you.
I am one who would stand up for you
Stay safe and very nicely written
Keep up the great work and stay positive
Em
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I agree with the poem.. but I am perfect....ly flawed
haha!
Hmm.. I've read a number of your works now, and I like how you use words and just bring them together to HIT me so hard it's like a slap in the face
I just wonder.. why do we keep friends whom we know would stab us in the back the moment we turn around? maybe we like the thrill of not knowing when they would do that? *highfives*
Thanks for this, nikkers the hickey! 
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Hope is infintely helpful.. I get exactly how ya feel.. It's hard losing people and having less-than-suitable friends, but you got the idea right about that hope stuff.
good work.
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