New Light Chapter 1

The crystal sky held ice that hanged down like finger's of the sky, painted in soft colors of pink. The air fed her nose with the coldness of love’s kiss. Soft beautiful kiss that fell within her heart as she fell in love with the man that loved her, yet how life wasn’t fair for his man never believe her for she was so beautiful. Her heart could chase any man, and he couldn’t chase any girl, but unknowing her love for him escaped his own. Her love touched the stars within his eyes and the void from his breath. His breath dressed in the rose scent she was so lost within his flesh. Classic love left their dream in reality and she was there. Her name was Jade and her hair was lost in colors of bark brown and eyes stained in sea blue as her skin a nice blanket of summer warm coffee brown as his. The wind slept quietly upon it. The man that loved her had long braids that drift back his dark brown face. His eyes held dark brown within as his lips the colors of fruit grape. The imagery that her eyes fell on was that off love’s beauty.

She pleaded to him that he shall believe in what her soul confessed. Soft words sketched in dreams she would say which made him turn his ears away. Jade found out she was pregnant just yesterday, having her period skipped last month from the glorious sex she had with him.

“I love you, oh I love you Jamal how do I tell you that I love you so you can believe. I do not know any other way for my kiss it too you don’t believe in. Shall I speak in whispers or shall I kiss softer?” She asked as she stood in front of him. The only audience was that of her house that stood it as if not motioned. “How do I tell the one that I really love? How must I feel to know you do not believe in me?” Making gestures with her face and arms.

He turned his face to her. His face seems so quiet as if he hid so many fears and questions. “Baby I love you but what you did to me I can not changed for it has only changed me. My words of honestly they find my whole emotions. What I say I can not change for you leave my words to be “I love you but do you love me?” he slowly spoke his flow gifted in so much tender honesty. Jade voice was much more unsure of, her attempt within was obvious as she tried to sound so serious. He felt as if she took everything as a joke yet he didn’t know she only blushed in so much love, love took her everything.

She gently put her hand upon his cheek. “These are the cheeks of my love. These are the cheeks that don’t believe me. I know I cheated on you. I know but I only did that because I was afraid so afraid that what power our love could do if you shall leave me. Baby that is the truth.” Somehow her voice seemed to be more innocent now, yet Jamal wasn’t sure.

Jade was very beautiful she had a nice slim body. She was nature’s finest beauty that floated against the air. She was like an apple tree. Standing there her leaves fluttering against the air. One thing that was so beautiful was her guiltiness. Her guiltiness would come during the most serious era when she felt so in love. Her mind wondered to his face, the words he spoke to her, everything. She had to fight what would be the battle to make him to believe in her. She couldn’t explain in words that he was unaccustomed too. They had to be words no other women had ever said. and what made him so attached to her was her spirit though she still looked beautiful, yet her guiltiness was only making her seem so ugly with so many lies she used to convince him. Could be a song to what would be beautiful or what would end with misery of questions what of the beginning had no faults?

“Look! You never tell the truth. I don’t believe you. I’m so tired of this!" He yelled. Thunder came within his eyes as blindness rose within hers. Her eyes spoke into red seas.

“Baby don’t do this to me! I only loved you that’s all. Oh please forgive me for all the wrong I had done. I’m not perfect.” Maybe trying to convince him was what she shouldn't have done.

He turned away his lips spoke, “I know”

The sky still looked the same. It seemed as if her love for him was still there. “Don’t leave me with this immense love I have for you. Please don’t tell me life isn’t fair.” Her voice drenched out

“Don’t leave me! I love you! I never had these feelings in the begging. Jamal I am pregnant and the baby is yours. Only yours. ” She fell on the dry floor as the lilies and rose blew from the other end. She fell her face within the sink of her arms. He floated within the wind. Her mind took her on the sins she did and she sat underneath the crystal sky. Everyday it reminded her as if his hands was pressing within. Well... that’s what she hoped. She sat their as eyes chased him behind as he wipe hiself from her sight. Days passed months passed but still not her memories of him. Her belly began to expand, a broken peice of her heart fell upon the dirt as it evaporated into the air upon the tree. It colors of yellow was shown as its blood dryed itself upon the sky which made the sky seems much reder.

To the wind she said as she wiped her eyes, “I now know, how it feels...when I lied to you.”

“You have been forgiven.

“but what about my love, what about who I love, he’s gone?” she asked as one tear fell slowly, hanging from her chin.

“but I love you.” it said

“Who are you?” Her eyes fell within curiosity

The one that loves you more and forever.” he said

"What love is this that loves me and understands?"
She said as her beath escape the air." She asked

Suddenly a tiny white light drew from her inside, and sat beside her. Then she felt as if a hand lifted her up. She sat upon the beautiful light of her as she saw many houses below and their was the man that left her, who she loved. He was kissing another women. The women had long red silky hair and green eyes. She was wearing a nice yellow shirt and brown skirt. She glance as she understood that he wasn't so inlove with her. He wasn't the man for her.

She looked above her as she saw the nice red sky but to the left their stood upon a white light a man. Was the man for her? Another beautiful kiss fell within her heart. He stretched his brown arms. How the man looked like Jamal. Could that be him? Then who was the man she saw underneath? She looked above.

"Jade I love you. My spirit sailed me across this wind to find you again. Be with me..."

She drifted her brown face to him. "Are you Jamal?"

"Yes Come kiss me again. Let's makes love upon the wind upon this house."

She turned to him as she made love with the ghost. She still wasn't sure if it was Jamal or his spirit but then again who was she and what was the baby? An angel within him, a ghost, or Jamal had magic. She slowly kissed him as she still tried to answer the question but what she was kissing she couldn't feel a thing. Was she in a dream? She put her arms gently on his back as she felt something hanging. He took her arms back upon her belly.

Suddenly she felt a small ache within her chest as she felt a force from it. She rubbed her hands upon it as she groaned, "oww the baby, I think its comming out." The baby fell out from her vagina into the wind. Oh how amazing she had given birth to the baby upon the wind. Wasn't that so funny?

The man's face smoked with joy. "Let me see the baby. Our baby. I want to name it Dreams" as his light brought him to her. She stood looking amzing at the baby as she was quiet hanging from her chord. The light came upon it the chord, it slowly tored.

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  • TheBlueRoad
    June 4, 2007

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    Incroyable!

    This is a GREAT EXCELLING STORY! I really like the process and how you introduce your characters. The dialogue really portrayed the character. Nevertheless, you really surprised me when you put in the story that Jade had a baby, i dunno, half-human and half-ghost or something!? That's a shocking turn, but it's really kinda cool to see it like that. Bravo! C'est excellent et vrai bien!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Asfand
    June 2, 2007

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    God that was GOOD!!! it was souch a touching and a memeorable experience!!! You really brought the night into view, and the emotions running through the characters were very vivid!! All in all!! You r one hell of a writer!!

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 4.