Love is Just



Love is just an emotion in your mind,

But it can take over your heart,

It can take over your soul,

It can leave you wanting more.

You can't touch it,

You can't see it,

You can't taste it,

You can't hear it,

You can't smell it.

If love leaves you,

You'll feel as if your best friend has died.

But love is just an emotion.

No matter what ne1 says

It's the strongest one you can have.

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This was ust a free write, but I decided to publish it.

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  • Frozen Angel
    July 26, 2007

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    I agree, but I think putting it as 'just an emotion' doesn't justify it. Anyways, it's a good poem, keep writing like this!

    *Frozen Angel*


  • bossy
    June 8, 2007

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    christa good job on the poem it was cute but touching at the same time so keep the good work up and if you like poems maybe you should check my poems out and tell me what you think("hungry","??")


  • romerooremor
    June 3, 2007

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    You got it!

    I see someone was paying attention during the 'abstract nouns' lesson! I don't usually comment on poems in this site, but I couldn't help that one. Good job!


  • Sweetie14
    June 1, 2007

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    THIS IS HOTT

    I LOVE IT!!!!! THAT'S JUST EXACTLY HOW I ALWAYS FEEL!!!!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

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