A Scream In The Night (Act One, Scene II)

SCENE II 1

(The next scene opens up in a police station. There are a few desks with computers, all unoccupied except for two. DEPUTY and JONATHAN BROWN are sitting at their desks working [The DEPUTY can either be male or female]. AIYA walks in with BEN her fiance from UR. They are talking softly until interrupted by BROWN) 2

BROWN: Ben! What a suprise. Who do you have here? 3

BEN: This is Aiya, my Fiance. I told you we would be coming by today, right? 4

BROWN: Yes...Yes, of course. Now I remember. Forgive me? (He looks to AIYA and 5

blinks a little. She seems slightly familiar to him) Now, young lady, Have I seen you before? 6

AIYA: I don't believe so, Mr. Brown. (She smiles warmly at him, though in the back of her mind she feels oddly tense and she shies away towards BEN just a little) 7

DEPUTY: Well hello there, Ben. Miss Green, I presume? Ben doesn't stop talking about you, young miss. You've caught his attention good. 8

AIYA: (Feeling slightly embarrassed) Why, That's a good thing...I...Think. (Looks up at BEN with a smile) 9

BEN: A very good thing...(Several moments of silence pass as they all stand looking slightly awkward.) 10

BROWN: What, she doesn't speak much, Ben? 11

AIYA: You must forgive me, Mr. Brown. I've not been so cheery for a long time and if I'm being poor company, please excuse. I've not been the same since my friend's murder a little less than a year ago. 12

BROWN: (Apprehensively) Murder? 13

AIYA: Yes, Murder. She was killed saving my life. 14

BEN: Dad, we really shouldn't talk about it. Aiya, I'll get us some breakfast. Care to come, Deputy? (With a nod, the both leave going DL) 15

BROWN: (Relieved) Very good. How are you, Miss Green? 16

AIYA: I'm doing about as well as can be expected, Mr. Brown. (She smiles a little bit) And yourself? 17

BROWN: (Attempting to keep his cool) I. Uh. Am fine, Thank you. 18

AIYA: Good to hear. (She pauses) I noticed you got a little nervous when I spoke of Dynasty. 19

BROWN: (To himself) So that was her name. 20

AIYA: Excuse? 21

BROWN: N-nothing, Miss. 22

AIYA: Hmm...All right then. If you say so. 23

BROWN: I Do. (Nodding his head) 24

AIYA: I'm surprised you didn't know of the murder. There's not many murders in this town and I'm pretty sure this station dealt with it. 25

BROWN: Well...Um..Uh.. (Loosing his cool, he raises a hand and scratches the back of his neck) 26

AIYA: (Raises an eyebrow as familiarity washes over her at the raised hand, eyes widening as if having a flashback. Here, You can hear Dynasty's voice screaming "AIYA! GO NOW!!!" and a panicked AIYA screaming "NOT WITHOUT YOU DYN!", almost an echo from the past) It's...you..(Loud whisper) You did it. 27

BROWN: Did what, Miss? 28

AIYA: Don't play dumb...You killed her...You.. 29

BROWN: I assure you, I...(AIYA interrupts as he gets up walking towards her) 30

AIYA: Don't you come near me...you...BASTARD! (Ben comes running out at the screaming, BROWN Moves back into his seat) 31

BEN: Is everything all right? 32

AIYA: No..But..It's going to be. (Casting a glance at BROWN. Here the scene ends. BEN should be looking confused at his father and fiance. BROWN has a worried expression on his face as the scene fades to black) 33

Author notes

Scene II of IV. For Scene III go here: storywrite.com/Story/709003

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  • Onyx Dragon
    July 7, 2004
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    3rd scene is up.

  • malvadadiosa
    July 7, 2004
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    Ashley and ashley give it 2 thumbs up!!!

    Wow.This was really shocking to me to hear that it was her fiance's father.Great job.You are going to be really great one day.

  • Sector-Hunter
    July 6, 2004
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    This was very good girl great work I like how you came up with this and it just flowed very well and the people in it put you in ahh with the depth of them wonderful work lots of love RObin...aka SH