Ice cream (an acrostic)

In love with all the different flavors

creamy and cool on a hot summer day

enter a world of enjoyment as all your problems go away

Cones of every kind

Relax and enjoy

Endur the best treat ever

Always being screamed for

Makes every body's summer worthwile

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  • miles of smiles
    June 7, 2007

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    I'm hungry Need I say more?

    -S

    P.S. It hurt my eyes to read against the background, though, but it may just be me


  • LostShadow silver member
    May 30, 2007

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    hmm it made me want ice cream nice nicely written it flows off the page very nicely. Loved how I was able to picture it.

    Very nicely done

    Keep up the great work

    Em


  • Mai4ever
    May 30, 2007
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    OMG..I'm just screaming for ice cream after reading this! This is terrific! Good luck!!