Three Way Poem (three poems with four lines)

  • The Crayon Game


Red, green and blue,

Crayons in my shoe!

Lets play the crayon game,

Now name all the colors you can name!
  • Jellybeans (versian 2)


Do you want to read about some jelly?

Oh why not have them in your belly?

Yes you do!

A jelly bean thats green and blue!
  • Land and Sea


Oh Land and Sea!

The beautiful sunshine shines on me!

The river slides rocks along,

The birds sing a wonderful song.

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  • Bitter Irony
    June 8, 2007

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    Fine if you don't know what I waka is, I said I didn't want waka anyway: I have a waka contest open if you ever learn to write one and want to enter it. :-) As far as these goes...I'm at a bit of a loss for words. :-) Funny, I guess, but not really as emotional as I was hoping for for the contest. Sorry, hope you understand: I just need to take every oportunity avaliable to narrow down the contestants list.


  • bedovich
    May 31, 2007

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    yayy sweeet poem i love it loads so funnny and cute well done sis(L)(L)i love it alots


  • Siby Anan
    May 30, 2007
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    I like the rhythm ^__^
    It's funny too!!
    Nice work!

    Did you win gold again?


  • Kari gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    lol This was really funny. I think that you did a good job and it put a smile on my face. Very well done!


  • Sunless Spirit
    May 30, 2007
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    um......funny


  • Frozen Fire Poet
    May 30, 2007
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    oh in jellybeans there is a thing going down. It says Do Ya

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