The other two officers come rushing down the stairs, guns drawn. Before they are in sight of my hand, I reach under the nearby table and draw out a 4 and a half foot sword. As soon as they come completely around the corner, I spring into action. I push Mandy to the ground, and leap over her. I land 2 feet in front of the officers, and drop to a crouch. In the blink on an eye, I slash from left to right, causing one of the officers to fall to the ground, screaming and holding the stumps that were where his leg met knee. 1
The other officer moves his gun to point toward Mandy, and I kick upwards, sending the gun into the air. He never had a chance. Dropping my sword, I jump up and backwards, and catch the gun in mid-air. I land hard on my back, but I recover quickly and pull the trigger three times. The first catches him in the throat, and the other two hit him squarely in the chest. He all to the floor, gurgling from the blood flowing freely out of his mouth and throat. 2
I stand quickly, and move to the officer I just shot. I roll him onto his back, and put a bullet in the middle of his forehead. I throw the gun down, and pick up my sword. The last officer is still screaming loudly, and I stab downward, right through the center of his throat. When his final breath escapes his lips, I draw the sword, and wipe it clean with his uniform.3
I turn slowly to Mandy, afraid for the first time since I was turned. Afraid of what she would think of me now, afraid to see that pained look on her face. Instead, I see a look of wonder on her face, complete and utter awe. “How... how did you...?” I smile, “Don’t you worry how I did it love, I did it so that we would be safe... well, safer.” I help her up, and apologize about the use of force against her. “Now love, about that note...”4
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please plase please let me know what you think! I have gotten next to no criticism on this.. and i would really like to know what you all think!
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nice....... *stares in wonder*
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hehe thankee baby
i purposely separated parts 6 n 7 because of that, so you would kinda want to read 7 to see what happens but yeah, your writings are just as good as mine baby.. i can just pump 'em out faster then you can :-P
Love,
Cammie -
masterful! lol, although...the last little part was way to detailed for me to read..at least this early in the morning, haha, but it still sounded good. do you think pt.6 and pt.7 should be put togther? either way..it doesnt matter...actually i think its cool, cuz when you read pt 6 its like.. "wait whoa..what's gunna happen?" and you're compelled to read pt7.
uhh.. if only it could actually be this way!!( ::: drifts into a day dream:::: ) okay sorry...as invisible says, "more please!"
i wanna know what happens to us next!
i got to thinking today... maybe i should try to catchup with you(writing my side of it that is). i dunno..i'll try. but dont expect it to be half as good as yours.(but you already know that.. cuz you're read what was it?..part 1-4 maybe.. i know you've read what i wrote) anyways, great job~ ill talk to you later.
love always
mandy
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more please. that was great.
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